Parched earth
Hungry for rains
To grow crops
Unhindered
Provide your needed support to the needy.
Support could be moral
Physical or financial
The deeper the well
The cooler the water.
The deeper the thoughts
The better the results.
If you want to succeed
Do something different
That is the need
Elders advice is worth millions
Well taken creates wonders
Play truant not
Concentrate on studies.
Work hard and succeed
Jo Jeeta woh sikander
He who wins is a winner
One can’t help everyone
But , one can definitely help someone.
Every tomorrow reduces age by one day
We keep planning
Tomorrow is my birthday, marriage anniversary
His birthday or his marriage anniversary
My promotion and his promotion.
Is all this required
Every breath we take is life
No breath no life
So must understand and enjoy life
Every tomorrow reduces age by one day
We keep planning
Tomorrow is my birthday, marriage anniversary
His birthday or his marriage anniversary
My promotion and his promotion.
We are fully engrossed
Massively puzzled
in such fallacious things .
Is all this required?
Hope sustains life
We must move on .
Move on Non stop
Lest we perish.
That’s absolutely right
Why see the worldly affairs
Meeting you and your appearance is enough.
Why knock others doors ?
Your assembly is enough.
In case of a non perennial nallah
First gushing water sound
Call it first fury sound .
Something it advises
Tells us Run for safety
And be careful hereafter.
In case of perennial water flow
Be it nallah , river , stream or so.
Muddy water muddish color
A warning sign.
Reminds water level rising
Or likely to rise
Truly so.
Strong winds come
Must have brought some message .
They tell us
Typhoon about to come.
Oh fiercest winds
Better change direction.
Your threatening fury
Is inconsequential here.
Oh thundering clouds
Frighten not.
Barking dogs seldom bite
We know all.
Peaceful environment don’t spoil.
Life is heartening
Death is disheartening.
To love is magnificent life
It adds on more number of years to life
Is full of happiness life
Hating is disheartened life
Some say life begins at fifty
Others say at sixty.
All wrong
Life only begins
When you stop thinking
What others about you are thinking
Life begins at any age
As and when you stop pleasing others .
Hurt them not
Who hurt you still
And hurt you the most
Is a sign of maturity.
Thunder of river in spate
Tells us something
What ? Just ponder.
Thundering sound of clouds
Is a sound
Like empty vessel sound makes much noise
If one has peace of mind
Take it one is most lucky
And nothing else is needed
Life is a limited edition
Encompasses subtractions and additions
Worry not about subtractions
And welcome additions
Love is elusive
Hold on to it strongly.
Anger is worse
So keep it suppressed .
When you talk to a friend
Happiness multiplies
And sadness lessens
So keep friendship everlasting.
Sir very well articulated
ReplyDeleteLife is one time adventure. Enjoy it's all colour with open mind.
ReplyDeleteVery nice thoughts penned down strategically.. congratulations buddy Pummi..
ReplyDeleteExcellent quoted sir, Touching very stage of life and very encouraging. Very nice thoughts it required lot of energy to penned to systematically.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your life and keep it continue. With regards.
Very great full thoughts Colonel Paramjit Singh Sir
ReplyDeleteSir , very nice thought excellent .
ReplyDeleteWeldone Pammi. Very well explained. Deeper meaning.
ReplyDeleteGreat sir good lines
ReplyDeleteYour work with the words is exceptional. I am high on motivation.
ReplyDeleteThe philosophy of life has been very well explained in depth. It has touched out the bare facts of nature and life.
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a wonderful expression of nature and life mixed with beautifully worded poem..
A motivational writeup which inspires you and clear funda of your philosophy of life.
It is crunch of life lession explained in a very beautiful way of poem. Each stenga describes a way of life. After reading the complete poem,one is provoked to look back the journey of life. Life is meant for living a useful way so that it may mean a lot to others. One should leave behind the impression in the life of other fellow mankind.
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ReplyDeleteWe keep planning.... Birthday... Marriges.. this stuff has been repeated twice (?)
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A creation with deep positive thoughts. For example, when you say "life is a limited edition " it means very expensive or we may say it is priceless. Like wise number of thengs to ponder on to derive tips for pleasant life.
Keep creating.
Very nice thought excellent sir
ReplyDeleteNicely written poem about zigsaw puzzles of life. We all human beings are the finest creation of the God with high emotional quotient and superior skills in comparison to other creatures. Even then our behavior and reactions will not be same for various day to day life problems. While few of us will react and solve these day to day intricacies of life with positive frame of mind and lead a happy and contented life ,on the contrary, a large percentage of people will remain angry and discontented with their lives. As famous poet Imam Bakhsh Nasikh has said" Zindagi zinda-dili ka hai nam hai, Murda- dil khaak jiya kartey hain". The ultimate aim of human life is to remain happy and contented against all odds.The author has highlighted almost all aspects nicely which are essential for leading a happy life without worries and negative thoughts. A great work indeed!!!.Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written poem about life. The purpose of our life should be to be happy ,enjoy each and every moment and not procrastinate our happiness to another day.each day each breath is a gift.we should learn to be contented with what we have and be grateful for everything..thanku uncle ji for this teaching and happy teachers day👏❤️
ReplyDeleteYou have described how little things matter in life...the depth of thoughts in our well(mind) can help us to give birth to our new self...... .how beautifully you have crafted these lines amazing work sir🌸💯💐
ReplyDeleteYou have written a good and motivated prose
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