Freelance writer and motivational speaker

Saturday, 21 August 2021

FUTILITY OF HUMAN VANITY AND PRIDE



When death demon strikes
Strikes like a thunderbolt strike.
Highly scaring heavy strike
Vanquished vanity and pride in one big unbeatable strike.
Though doctors enough tried
Failed but continuously tried .
Unluckily the man could not be survived
When death demon strikes.
Gone are the kings and queens
Victors and victims of war. Struck with equally ferocity
Death is really  gusty and nasty.
Earn no praise
And never ever a craze.
Pink of health turns pale
Whenever death strikes.
Hale and hearty are too gone
Futility of human vanity and pride .
For no rhyme and reason
After all what for.
Death levels everyone
Haves and have nots.
None can ever escape
Till alive better behave.
Partiality with none
Equal ferocity for everyone.
Shrieks and groans heard
After death strikes
Man is gone
Behind the scene is blurred.
Batons change
And change continues.
Only will blossom good deeds
Will be remembered
when people pass by the grave.
Do good , take a best try
Before one dies.
Good you doeth
Before you goeth.

Col Parmjit
Sainik Colony

40 comments:

  1. Very thoughtful and beautiful!

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    1. Shed ego And live happily . Vanity will never work as simple

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  2. Thanks unknown for your appreciation. God bless

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  3. Your thought very awsome and true

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  4. Dear Harish it is totally futile to Think that one is great and non perishable. Kill your ego and enjoy life

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  5. Sir ji I appreciate you from the heart for the Poem you have written.πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

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  6. Thank you very much for your encouraging comments. God bless

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  7. As the title of the poem says -"Futility of human vanity and pride"
    It is hundred percent true .our all falsehood of wealth, pride and power vanishes in one stroke once the death comes in front of you. It is indeed the truth of life. We must endeavour to work for the needy and helpless people and earn blessings of God which will remain with you as your real treasure nothing else. So one must lead a pious and sacred life.
    Very motivating and impressive poem.

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  8. Dear agni buddy thanks a lot for your encouraging comments. God bless

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  9. Dear agni buddy you have rightly written that one must enjoy some years of life and these are the years we are going through. Shun ego and live a fantastic and magnificent life ahead whatever balance left over

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  10. Ghamand kis cheez ka not required

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  11. Absolutely rightly you have commented this is the truth of life

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  12. Very much motivating and impressive thought expressed in this poem. Every human being must try to work for needy and helpless people and earn the blessings of God which will be really trousers with you during life time as well as after death also. Suraj

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  13. Yes absolutely true. Whatever you have mentioned in your worthy comments really holds true. Our good deeds stand us in good stead even after we perish . So always help needy and do good always wherever possible

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  14. Dear Suraj thanks for your encouragement. Aim is improvement of society and surroundings in whatever way one can do

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  15. Ghamand kis cheez ka aur kis liye. Worthless. Forget about fame and name live a good life

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  16. Dear unknown thanks for your appreciation

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  17. Really it is futile to think even that I am great . No one is great. Death the leveler remember that.

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  18. You had failed Shakespeare

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  19. Oh please I respect your words but personalities like Shakespeare are much above us. I am nothing in front of them. Thanks for your encouragement

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  20. Ego kis liye . Not required. Mera mera mein mein not required .

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  21. True. It is foolish to believe in false vanity and false pride

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  22. Nice poem sir.you have written πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  23. Thank you so much if you found it interesting read. God bless

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  24. God bless you you are doing on free cost

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  25. Great πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Truly speaking yes by all means why have ego and such other things. Nothing will go along with us . So have no gamand

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  27. Absolutely true lines you have written

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    1. Thank you dear raja. All due to your good wishes and my waheguru’s blessings

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  28. Gamand kis cheez ka aur kis liye . Bekaar hai aisa karna!

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  29. Very true sir and it is reality. kill your ego and always enjoy your every time of life with happiness or live without tension . Never think what people think about you.

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  30. Kill your ego and enjoy life with happiness. Thoughtful

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