Fag end years
Worth to say golden years .
Time to forget yester years
Once for all the previous years.
Urge to amass wealth
At the cost of old age and good health.
The retired man is like a goose
That lays golden eggs.
Why can’t you enjoy
Since you had enough.
By the way plethora quantum of wealth of no avail
When the death demon bell tinkles
And rings at our door
And the man goes.
If money matters
No rich person would die
Or could have died
Come what may.
But reality is kings and queens
All vanquished and vanished
Haves or have nots.
What worth are ours few crores.
At the fag end stop rat race
No inflated own triumphs required
No fame or fortune required .
After all what worth
So mention not
Just enjoy life and remain quiet.
Be with those who are good humans
And well understand life.
If a person has adequate food to eat
Clothes to wear
And a shelter to live
There is no problem whatsoever.
The serenity days are gala days
Celebratory days
Like a retired Celebrity celebrate these days.
The essence of life is be satisfied
Spend quality time with your loved ones and friends
Let this be the life trend.
Life is beautiful
Make it more beautiful .
Life is magnificent
when magnificent people are around .
Cast back your mind
Few years are left to live by
Than the years lived behind.
Don't goof up these years
Celebratory years .
Life is a one time gift
Enjoy this gift
Live well fag end years
My dear friends.
Col Parmjit
Sainik Colony
Saturday, 21 August 2021
FAG END YEARS
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Total truth... should we cry for years gone by n spent or improve on what's ahead- for self n those with you.... Nicely worded thought Pammi...love you brother...
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