WE CAN , WE CANNOT
Respect god we can
Dishonour we cannot.
Respect nation we can
Disregard we cannot.
Respect elders we can
Disrespect we cannot.
Help the needy we can
Help all and sundry we cannot.
Help hapless we can
Help fake guys we cannot.
Love all we can
Hate all we cannot.
Contribute towards nation building we can
Non contribution towards nation building we cannot.
Help society grow we can
Pull back societal growth we cannot.
Contribute towards world peace we can
Non contribution towards world peace we cannot.
Love humanity we can
Love not humanity we cannot.
Love harmony we can
Disharmony we cannot.
Love peace we can
Disturb peace we cannot.
Love all and hate none
God bless all.
col parmjit
sainik colony
Golden words ✌
ReplyDeleteDear Parth thanks for your encouraging comments. If you liked it , I played my part well. God bless
ReplyDeleteGood sr
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words. We must do good and definitely we all can And dishonor never and we can’t
DeleteGreat. One can respect or disrespect. Positive option is respect.
ReplyDeleteDear buddy thanks for your encouragement and yes we all By all means must respect our seniors and elders and disrespect We should never. Respect we can we must and disrespect we shouldn’t and we can’t
ReplyDeleteThe dos and donts of life has been portrayed very honestly. Wisdom of life has been so simply put, thats the beauty of the poem.
ReplyDelete"Disregard Nation we cannot" very nicely written PJ Sir
ReplyDeleteDisregard towards nation and never. We can’t show disrespect and disregard towards nation at any point of time as a good and disciplined citizen. Period. Sir thanks for your appreciation and encouragement
DeleteVery good collection of ideas and educative . Let us follow some of them to make our family , society and country great and worth living. Thanks for writing so nicely ji
ReplyDeleteThanks for appreciating , which acts as catalyst for me to perform better in future. Aim is to pen down few lines which may be of some help to some at some point of time.Absolutely you are right to work for making society a better living place is possible not impossible
Deletegood, encoraging lines from army m's heart
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ReplyDeleteVery nice poem , nobody can do disregard to the Nation,teaching must start from primary education in the country...
ReplyDeleteDisrespect and disregard to nation, never and we can’t and we shouldn’t. Yes you are absolutely right teaching must start from rudimentary education
DeleteNice Sir
ReplyDeleteDear Kulbir thanks. Just some sort of awakening call at some point of time to those who understand . That’s all
DeleteReally wonderful way of teachings for everybody what and in which way should we perform our duties. Excellent selection of words
ReplyDeleteMy dear buddy you are very supportive and prompt I know. Aim has always been to write something which is of some value Or more value to some readers and is interesting for our readers. Thanks for your encouraging comments. God bless
DeleteReally inspiring words.....one must lead a simple life and must satify oneself for what he has received in his life...
ReplyDeleteDear Balbir thanks for your supportive comments . Simple living and living a good and meaningful life is very important definitely. Remember always dos and do’nts
DeleteWell written Param. Good thoughts
ReplyDeleteDear sir as I maintain that you are the one who taught me how to walk In the new life different from civil as my immediate senior. Thanks for your good wishes
DeleteWe respect each others, positive thoughts. Our duty, respect elderly , senior Officers n respect Nation policy. Well experience Col Pammee. God bless you Poet. From Baldev Dogra
ReplyDeleteDear baldev buddy, yes we must respect each other. Maintain positive thoughts and these generate positivity and positive energy Flows out.Aim is to improvement of society which is possible when we all together work in one direction. Thanks for your genuine support
DeleteNice lines k
ReplyDeleteThanks for finding suitable. God bless
DeletePositive and encouraging to every one in the society as well as for whole people/community irrespect of cast and religions.
ReplyDeleteMy aim of writing is to get some individuals toe our line of thinking that is to improve society individuals and country as much as possible. Alone one cannot. Yes you are absolutely right irrespective of caste and religion.
DeleteParam ji very nice and positively explained.
ReplyDeleteNo one disregard to nation..
Dear buddy thanks for appreciation. We must be very careful in use of we can and we can’t. We all must respect nation and we can
DeleteInspiring thoughts dear Param 👌
ReplyDeleteDear buddy am honored if you got inspired. That means I was absolutely right In using correct words and their correct use at the correct place
DeleteDear buddy am honored if you got inspired. That means I was absolutely right In using correct words and their correct use at the correct place
DeleteWonderful lines
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging comments. God bless
DeleteThanks for your encouraging comments. God bless
DeleteAmazing write-up💯
ReplyDeleteIf you found the write up convincing and interesting am glad really speaking. My thrust is my readers and they must change little bit if not wholly
DeleteIf you found the write up convincing and interesting am glad really speaking. My thrust is my readers and they must change little bit if not wholly
DeleteAs always...no words can ever describe you..words with great power
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words. Aim has always been to jot down few lines for the benefit of readers who make the society and are good citizens of our nation
DeleteAbsolutely right bade papa ji
ReplyDeleteRegards Ashish Toor
Dear ashish yes certain things certainly we can and some we cannot . Remember can and can’t.
DeleteDear ashish yes certain things certainly we can and some we cannot . Remember can and can’t.
DeleteWonderful and nice collection of thoughts found in the poem to act upon so that a person can lead a simple and respectful life. Respect all and disrespect to none should be the Moto of the human being. I want to say with my experience that you should respect the idea of the other even though you are disagree to achieve the goal in the life. Suraj
ReplyDeleteYes you are absolutely right we must respect all which we can and to show disrespect towards someone we can’t. You are correct in saying that we must appreciate good work done by anyone
ReplyDeleteArjun... Poem give us positive vibes. If your thoughts are positive then your goal is not so far
ReplyDeleteThanks for appreciating. Wrote to change some minds if one can and if possible. Positivity yes that we always maintain. Positivity for sure wins
ReplyDeleteThanks for inspiring us to stay positive in Life.
ReplyDeleteSanjeev
Oh if you got convinced I am extremely happy. Stay positive because positive attitude generates positivity and positivity at the end wins
ReplyDeleteWell thought innovative concept of "we can" & "we can not"..... to me it's something like .....we can enter the "light" (Knowledge)... We can not enter the "darkness" (ignorance)
ReplyDeleteBut alas! often most of us always in haste,do other way round... and result is that we more than often need someone to show us light. Right?
And your creation is playing that role!!
Kudos!!
Dear buddy you have hit the nail in on the head . What we can do must do . We can respect our great nation, we all must do.we cannot dishonor our parents and our nation too is right
ReplyDeleteVery well written the concept of We Can and we can not. Good thoughts put on paper. Baldev Singh Patiala.
ReplyDeleteMy dearest buddy am thankful to you for your encouraging comments. Aim of writing is to change some minds if we can as you changed mine. Aim is improving and improvement all around
ReplyDeleteThe philosophy of life is a Mistery. But positivity is a reality. One's aim in the life should be able to make life pleasant for self as well as to the others.
ReplyDeleteवसुदेव कुटुंबकम् is our philosophy to bring positivity and bring harmony among mankind of the world.
The poem take you towards the unique experience of positivity and harmony among mankind.
A very very positive and thoughtful expression of life to be followed for the betterment of humanity.
Excellent and throught provoking .
Carry-on. Well done.
My dearest agni buddy thanks for your good words. I appreciate you for your encouraging words, well worded and well meaningful, a good read for the readers . You know at this stage and my way of looking at things, aim is to give good advice to readers as much as possible and nothing for personal benefit. Yes personal benefit is society must improve and we all should become good and well disciplined citizens.yes you are absolutely right, positivity is the main aim and do something good for humanity in whatever form.
ReplyDeleteencouraging lines right from heart of an army man
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouragement. Lines are really personal and penned down what felt was right. We must respect god and parents, disrespect and disregard we can’t
DeleteBeautiful combinations of words CAN & CAN'T in affirmative narration. Yes, we CAN do whatever little to help our fellows around in this trying times but we CAN'T imagine to make other suffer bcoz of selfish gains.Being human is the need of the hour & your poem reflects the same. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteDear buddy thanks for your encouraging comments. I penned down poem we can , we can’t, thinking some people will learn and rise to the occasion. At this age aim is to impart good things impartially to all concerned. Those who want to benefit must and those who feel they know everything upto them. God bless all but
ReplyDeleteDearest Param you have once again proved the effects of a simple word from honest heart...well done
ReplyDeleteLet's do what we can n not try what we can not...Keep it up my dear..
My dearest buddy Virender our love at first sight in army at pachmarhi while we were trained together and carried on since then on a wonderful note. Aim has always been to write which could awaken some people to do good in life as much as possible . Thanks for your really meant encouragement. God bless
ReplyDeleteReal positive thoughts. Contribute positively in all fields. Nation first should be motto.
ReplyDeleteDearest buddy Mishra ji am thankful to you for your encouraging comments. Aim has always been to write positive and worthwhile matters so that some people may benefit. We all must do what we can . God bless all . Country first is the approach and we all must strive hard to contribute towards nation building.
ReplyDeleteIt was Realy a great msg👍👍
ReplyDeleteDear Parth thank you very much. God bless. If you are convinced that writing was valuable. It is good thing.
Deletethanx for such a lovely theme sir
ReplyDeleteOh kaps thanks for your support. Aim is to suggest things which may change future course of action in someone’s life sometime. That’s all
ReplyDeleteMagnificent work👌👍
ReplyDeleteDear narinder thanks a lot for appreciating the poem , hoping you liked it. I am extremely happy to know that .let some people benefit which is the predominant aim. God bless
ReplyDeleteDear col. Param jeet sir your poem is awsome
ReplyDeleteThanks. You liked the poem, am glad. Aim is to write something useful for humans society and country that’s all. God bless
ReplyDeleteThe possibilities and impossibilities of social expectations and the need to abide by the possible which makes the world a better place to live have been covered by the Author through this poem. A good read indeed
ReplyDeleteBuddy thanks a lot for your encouraging words. Aim I always maintain to write something which can be of some value for individuals country and humanity. That’s all
ReplyDeleteDear Param,your all poem's really touch upon all core issues of human's life in detail.Your ideas are pragmatic and present kaleidoscopic view of Indian society. It is desired that we as a human being must inculcate values like Honesty, Integrity, Loyalty & also love & care for our society & Nation.Therefore ,our behaviour & conduct with our fellow countrymen must be cordial & responsible. Love always wins hearts & anger always causes destruction.
ReplyDeleteMy dear buddy thanks for your good words. Buddies are great strength for each other truly speaking. I for one believe in it to the core. Aim has always been to write which can benefit some individuals, help in building affinity amongst people and help develop nationalism . We all must love our parents and elders and love our nation too, which we all can and we must. Period. Disrespect to parents we can’t
DeleteCol. Saab बहुत अच्छा संदेश!
ReplyDeleteDearest Raju Choudhary thanks. You liked the poem am glad that it was of some value to someone, like you. God bless
DeleteDearest Raju Choudhary thanks. You liked the poem am glad that it was of some value to someone, like you. God bless
DeleteRam Raj Verma .. very nicely written poem, teaches about good views and ideas
ReplyDelete..good
My dear buddy RRVerma thanks for your encouraging comments. Aim is to pen down thoughts so that some people may benefit which further helps in building a strong and cohesive society and at the end a strong nation
DeleteIncredible. Beautiful
ReplyDeleteDear Rajnesh thanks for your encouragement and good words. I always try to write non controversial things and mostly relating to building strong relationships and friendships and always talk of positivity and positivity science
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines sir ... Really sir you always encourage towards optimistic mind.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravi . Thanks tons for your appreciation. My aim has always been to become an encourager and never a person who would say cannot be done. Our approach is everything is possible provided one is focused
ReplyDeleteVery nyc sir
ReplyDeleteDear anshu thanks god bless. Let us all make a good society worth admiring .
DeleteYour these brilliant thoughts are infectious .👍👏
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words. If you liked the ideas penned down am gladdened. God bless all and a good society is deserved and desirable and desired.
DeleteTrue if we will respect our elders today then only we will get respect from others in future ..........(by Danish )
ReplyDeleteDear danish great comments and well worded and well meaningful. This is the aim that is to guide people to the hilt to walk on that road or as per the guidelines is a personal choice. Let us all do good to our parents and needy people and we all can
ReplyDeleteSuper line sir
ReplyDeleteIts harish
Thank you so much . If you liked the poem , I take it that the theme selected was correct. Waheguru bless
ReplyDeleteDear Harish thanks for your encouragement and you are really punctual sincere and dedicated in your profession I know
ReplyDeleteGreat👍👍👍👍
ReplyDeleteDear Manoj thanks a lot god bless. Penned down thoughts for the benefit of public in general. Those who are interested
ReplyDeleteGreat lines you have written sir
ReplyDeleteHello dear unknown am glad that you liked the poem. Thanks for your encouraging words. God bless. Aim is to write which can be of some value to the readers. That’s all.
ReplyDeleteExcellent way to differentiate what we can & we can’t,a very thin line between these two aspects of various phenomenon of life which you have attempted to distinguish nicely.
ReplyDeletePeace love & happiness for one & all
Dear buddy, buddies like you are my strength and they are the ones who always coax me to pen down some thoughts which may be of some value to someone . Also aim has Always been to ask people to rise , grow and become good citizens and infact good human beings So as to serve humanity better. A good society and a good country should always be the aim
ReplyDeleteVery right.We should do whatever we can do for the needy persons and also for the upliftment of the society
ReplyDeleteMy dear buddy pritam , what you have penned down is absolutely right. This is what exactly we wish to preach and do earnestly as much as possible. Society and country must improve with excellent Human Resources is the thrust
ReplyDeleteGreat thoughts sir
ReplyDeleteThank you . You liked the poem good enough
ReplyDeleteNice thought shared about the positivity. Positivity takes towards success and good ness.
ReplyDeletePositivity, positivism pays and definitely lead one towards success for sure. Positivity charges and individual with positive energy, which gives better dividends. We can change ourselves we must and try on others too .
ReplyDeleteRightly said. Spread positivity, shun negativity. Peace 🕊️ ..
ReplyDeleteVerma (Sai Kalan)
Yes cent percent. Positivity is supreme and is truth and wins . That’s all. Thanks for your encouragement
DeleteThis is positivity and negativity two waves in our brain.its upto you how u cultivate and produce in words and deeds.it looks a very little contribution but it works on the whole universe system so always be positive.
ReplyDeleteThanks mr Param sir for
Rejuvenating lines
Abhishek Singh
Central University of Jammu
Yes you are absolutely right in saying that it is upto an individual as to how to cultivate and produce in words and on ground action. We all must shun negativity and let positivity prevail a boon for all in solving many ticklish problems at many a times.
ReplyDeleteDear Abhisek thanks for your heartfelt comments . Thank you so much for your encouragement
Your thoughts r really well written on positivity . Must shun all negative thoughts to lead a happy n contended life . God bless !
ReplyDeleteYes buddy you are absolutely right that positivity must overtake negativity and shun negativity in all its manifestations and forms . Waheguru bless all
DeleteThanks for your encouragement. God bless
ReplyDeleteMarvellous work👌
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your encouragement. If you liked the poem am glad
ReplyDeleteThis great message to the young generation because in this world everybody forget the god
ReplyDeleteGreat lines written sir you must continue
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouragement and god bless all. Whatever we can do we must and we can’t Be respectful towards our country or elders .
DeleteThanks for your good words , which would always encourage me to write something new for our readers
DeleteSorry correction, we can’t be disrespectful towards our country or elders. We all must respect our country and elders always.
ReplyDeleteEvery thing has two faces good and bad two ways. It depends on us to follow the right path. Nice & well done.
ReplyDeleteDear Manoj thanks for your encouraging comments. Heads you win tails you lose. So remember good things we all will and must do. What is not in favour of Our nation we cannot and we will not do.
ReplyDeleteAwsome sir
ReplyDeleteThanks Harish . God bless. If one can do something for society one must in whatever form and One can
DeleteMind blowing sir your a diamond which are dificult to find for any one
ReplyDeleteNo so much praise please needed am a common and normal person who definitely loves his nation and it’s people that is we all and always cherish all to grow from strength to strength and we all should reach out and help each other wherever one can and which we all can. His highness the god bless all
ReplyDeleteWao so great...nicely written sir
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your encouraging comments. If you got influenced that means my selection of ideas was good. God bless. All waheguru’s blessings
DeleteSurya here sir
ReplyDeleteMy dear Surya thanks a lot. God bless
ReplyDeleteAap great ho sir ji
ReplyDeleteNo great. Only your good wishes and my waheguru’s blessings indeed Ask me to pen down few lines as deemed fit and bubbling in my mind. That’s all god bless all
ReplyDeleteLove this poem too much really what you have written
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation. God bless
ReplyDeleteGreat thought sir...
ReplyDeleteAmit Bhaiji thanks a lot
ReplyDeleteGreat sir
ReplyDeleteGolden words
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