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Parched earth Hungry for rains To grow crops Unhindered Provide your needed support to the needy. Support could be moral Physical or fin...
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Passing of stools Preferably in the morning once Without medicines or pressure . No unwanted pain Or body ache And aggressive exercises who...
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When death demon strikes Strikes like a thunderbolt strike. Highly scaring heavy strike Vanquished vanity and pride in one big unbeatable st...
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Fag end years Worth to say golden years . Time to forget yester years Once for all the previous years. Urge to amass wealth At the cost of o...
Wow Pammi, what an excellent thoughts and expression in a poetic form. You have covered all miseries brought on human race by nature mother in last one century. The nature knows how to balance and bring equilibrium. We need to understand nature and adjust ourselves accordingly and not vice versa. Earlier the human race understands this better it is. Well done dear. Keep up the good work. Baldev Patiala.
ReplyDeleteDear buddy thanks tons for appreciating my efforts. I may not be deserving what all you Have said about me . But thanks still AAPKO ACCHA LAGA .My aim is very simple and clear to apprise the people in general through this media that let us all unite likeminded and make society a better living place and help each other as much as possible. Let us all be honest to the brim , when we know nothing one can take along.
ReplyDeleteExcellent words.... Lets pray together for the better health of our corona warriors and survivours
ReplyDeleteDear Parth you rightly said let us all pray in unison for the well being of all our corona warriors and survivors as well . Well fought we will be the winners. This day shall pass too. Thanks for your appreciation. Aapko accha laga muje bhi accha laga
ReplyDeleteAmazing💯
ReplyDeleteThanks brother god bless. Do good and let good prevail
DeleteThanks brother god bless. Do good and let good prevail
DeleteVery well written poem by the author giving full details of current pandemic which is in some form a wrath of god . And the previous wraths too call it first or Second World War. We humans should try to live within our own means is a lesson for all of us .
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for appreciating, the aim was to put across views which may appear good to some of us and we all take a lead to improve and learn good qualities including honesty and nation first always approach
ReplyDeleteDear Param, this is quite a thought-provoking poem yet again which you penned down for the enlightenment of the society.It speaks volumes about your humane qualities,staunch love for country & care gor humanity. In the present trying period of human sufferings on account of Covid pandemic, your poem certainly boosts up the morale of citizens & rejuvenates the society at large.Well done yet again.All the best for your forthcoming writings.
ReplyDeleteMy dear buddy thanks a lot for your appreciation Which I may not be deserving. But yes my aim of writing this very poem was a sort of wake up call for all to rise to the occasion and behave in a befitting honest manner And let us all together make a good society
DeleteParamjit buddy ,
ReplyDeleteBeautifully artistically coloured written poem on But this too shall pass!
You have nicely described the great tragedies of the world like World War-1 n 2 n Spanish Flu where in whole world suffered n fighting unitedly came out victorious. Same way we ourselves also faced numerous problems in life n fought with courage , patience n perseverance n succeeded. That too passed . We do not become hero after we overcome the problems but a hero is revealed during the struggle to fight with the problems we faced. And we know that this will also pass. So whatever great problems we have ,if we have patience , will to fight , positive appch , grit , determination ,winning spirit n lastly the faith in God in us , no power on earth can fail us to come out victorious since we r totally convinced that this too shall pass. Amitabh Bachan ‘s poem ‘yeh Mushkil dour bhi Gujar jaye ga , Gujar jaye ga ‘also make us strong , confident n courageous to face it squarely .
Once again heartiest congrats on writing this beautiful poem on the wrath of God .
Thanks a lot buddy. Waheguru bless us all. Yeh dour bhi hai do chaar din ka mohtaaj
ReplyDeleteYeh bhi gujjar jayega
Aayegi basant bahaar
Jindagi Hans ke gujaar
A humble call for all.
Buddies like you are my strength always and every time, just wanted to remind all that nothing shall go along, everything will be left behind Here on this earth. So love all hate none and be honest and help all. That’s all. Be a good human being and be humane. Thanks for you encouragement and encouraging comments
ReplyDeleteSURAJ. Very excellent and colourful poem prepared on the present pandemic wrath. The author has expressed about the past present and future wrath of God. We all together should pray for the well being of Crona warriors and survivors. With the blessing of God this pandemic wrath will also pass peacefully. Always think for the betterment of the society and pray the God for that. Regards
ReplyDeleteLife in fact is colorful And not the poem provided we know who to live. The wrath of god or the misfortunes we humans demand. Hum kaam hi aise karte hain ki Bhagwan Maj boor ho jate hain . But worry not this shall pass.yes we all must pray for corona warriors and survivors. Thanks for your good wishes. Waheguru bless
DeleteLife in fact is colorful And not the poem provided we know who to live. The wrath of god or the misfortunes we humans demand. Hum kaam hi aise karte hain ki Bhagwan Maj boor ho jate hain . But worry not this shall pass.yes we all must pray for corona warriors and survivors. Thanks for your good wishes. Waheguru bless
DeleteDear Pammi. Excellent words poem. You are appreciate in situation Pandemic virus. Nature formula and balance the human race. Pollution is increasing day by day n oxygen in less at atmosphere. We face situation. God bless your's positive thoughts. Baldev kaundal
ReplyDeleteMy dearest buddy thanks a lot for your good wishes and encouraging words.yes you are absolutely right nature will work out the balance. My aim is to bring on board all to make society a better place as much as possible. Nothing goes along everything is left behind . So do good which counts. Period
ReplyDeleteLets hope for the good and peaceful time after corona.
ReplyDeleteSunil choudhary
Vijay pur
Good dear Sunil . Yes definitely this shall pass too. Thanks
ReplyDeleteNice thoughts.
ReplyDeleteCL Verma (Sai)
Thanks civils aspirant. Waheguru bless you in your future endeavors too. Thanks for appreciating
DeleteIn this pandemic period, all that we can do is hope for the best
ReplyDeleteBy Ashish Toor
Yes ashish absolutely true hope for the best, but precautions must and we all humans should behave and act in a moat honest manner Failing which next tragedy befalls
ReplyDeleteYeah , right said bade papa g
DeleteMost honest manner is the best way to steer in life and please god , so that god takes care of us all truly speaking. Maro Mari shod do ( shun away dishonesty) and try to live within own means , a best and most satisfying way of living a happy life
ReplyDeleteThe poem is emotional with flavour of positivity that made me comment .
ReplyDeleteIt is true that such tragedies are beyond the control of us, by any means. It seems to be so small in front of it. Humans are helpless . May be it's nature's design to conserve nature or to make us realise that he is supreme, we are powerless inspite of so called such advancement of science.
Such pitty, tiny virus has shaken the entire mankind on this Earth. We look so tiny and helpless in front of it and call it a natural calamity.
It make us realise that glamour, richness, high position are totally s vanity and your real friend is your own health , wellness and your good deeds towards humanity.
Once this mirage of pride, achivement jealousy have vanished with one's own body , only your good deeds are remembered. So why to strive for such falsehood of life.
You are right to say, since nothing is certain on this earth, so let's make the life pleasant, amicable, adorable and enjoying with the sweetness of mutual trust and relationships. Friendship in true sense be the key to the happy and satisfying span of our balance life.
Let us spread joy and bliss all around us.
Wishing a blissful and happy life to everyone.
My dear buddy you people are my strength always. Whatever I have penned down is primarily due to your good wishes and My waheguru’s Blessings. Nothing is certain on this planet earth so love all hate none and always do good deeds and maintain good friendship with friends and nature. Spread fragrance of happiness and positivity around
DeleteDear kaps god bless
ReplyDeleteThanks kaps god bless. Thanks for encouraging words god bless
ReplyDeleteThe author has correctly brought out that we shouldn’t amass huge properties through illegal means. We must earn through honest means as much as possible.
ReplyDeleteSharry thank you for your encouraging words. Please remember all honesty is the best policy and god will bless. Be honest to the brim and don’t invite wrath of god by earning through dishonest means please please
DeleteGreat run of events n feelings. "Mashan gyaan" runs in our veins so we need to be reminded of the ultimate destination "mashan".(cremation ground)n that kafan doesn't have pockets. God does it frequently n creative writing like this follows, .. well done..
ReplyDeleteMy dearest buddy, friends like you are my real strength. Very few appreciate and others are ready to let you down anytime. My views are really speaking in consonance with yours exactly. Coffin has no pockets so there is no need to amass much more than one really wants, but yes human wants are unlimited as economics say , but not worth it. Honest means the best option
DeleteThe author has explicitly expressed his views that nothing one should earn through illegal means . Such an attitude invites a wrath from god, where all of us suffer
ReplyDeletePlease all of us can work together in one direction and stop the forthcoming wraths of god. Let us not go on the wrong track of earning through dishonest means. Let us all help each other by doing good to all as much as possible
DeleteVery well written poem by the author giving full details of current pandemic which is in some form a wrath of god . And the previous wraths too call it first or Second World War. We humans should try to live within our own means is a lesson for all of us .
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging comments. Tried to pen down few lines for the general benefit of all and sundry by suggesting Things as master guidelines not to indulge in wrong doings that’s all. God bless all. Work hard to earn your livelihood through honest means
DeleteThanks for your encouraging comments. Tried to pen down few lines for the general benefit of all and sundry by suggesting Things as master guidelines not to indulge in wrong doings that’s all. God bless all. Work hard to earn your livelihood through honest means
DeleteYour words are amazing and your positive thoughts are infections.☺☺
ReplyDeleteYour words are amazing and your positive thoughts are infections.☺☺
ReplyDeleteDear am so glad that you liked the thoughts. My aim was to pen down something relating to the ongoing pandemic also , so as to little bit help all understand how can we all put together can stop the future wrath by doing good deeds for the world humanity at large. Thanks for appreciating waheguru bless
ReplyDeleteIf you could measure the depth of my Positive thoughts really. I appreciate you Got that god bless
ReplyDeleteI hope that we will succeed. I really appreciate everything you do.
ReplyDeleteThanks for you great supportive words. Definitely we will win this war of current pandemic by fighting hard against it Together. Yes we will succeed
ReplyDeleteThis pandemic has taught this mankind a big lesson...in such difficult times..we need to unite together because together we can have such a vision that would be much greater than any vision we could ever have alone.....your words are so true about the current situation...i really appreciate your work through bottom of my heart as i know it take immense of efforts and great toil to pen down our thoughts ...absolutely great work
ReplyDeleteRegards
NARINDER SINGH
Thanks brother for your good and encouraging comments which I may not deserve. But thanks a lot. Tried to pen down few lines to express my emotions and sentiments in real terms. Your comments believe you me are well worded and very meaningful indeed without an iota of flattery from my side . It speaks of your well deserving qualification and professional competence, which I admire . Well done god bless you. We all should unite and fight together and we will win hundred percent as togetherness is a reckoning force
ReplyDeleteReal narration of the suffering in the best possible ways. Thanks parmjit. Kudo Keep it up. Your words are from your inner heat
ReplyDeleteCases are still on the rise. Let us all cooperate and support each other by taking full COVID appropriate precautions and defeat the demon once for all , for sure. Good morning
DeleteMy dear buddy thanks a lot . Just made up my mind to educate some who would definitely understand and educate others too around. We are safe only when all people Around are hale and hearty safe and sound. We all together can defeat current pandemic without any doubts is my resolve. Thanks for your encouraging pat
ReplyDeleteOnce we choose hope, anything's possible🙂
ReplyDeleteThe situation is alarming with regard to Covid . We all together can defeat the Covid menace . So why not ?let us all fight together please. Good morning god bless
DeleteAt least we all should adhere to each one teach one approach
DeleteMind you I am ok you are ok is the best solution
You scratch my back I will scratch yours type
Bacho aur bachao
We must support government
All should wear double mask
Government to address shortages of oxygen, beds and medicines and doctors
We citizens and the government and the politicians must come together in this emergency situation and grapple the problem effectively
All is possible
Nothing impossible
Save India and Indians all together
Absolutely true you have hit the nail on the head. Good keep surging ahead with high hopes
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem..
ReplyDeleteWe can together
DeleteAnd we will together
Defeat corona once for all.
A victory for all
A corona free world a happy resort
We all won and our prayers did all
You liked the poem am happy. God bless
ReplyDeleteDon’t take Covid lightly and please be fully enveloped with precautions and pray for patients in hospitals. Good morning
DeleteWhat a thought process Param. God bless you
ReplyDeleteCases are on the rise . Let us all become self disciplined and take full precautions to keep oneself safe and all others , a humanitarian call please . Maan bhi jao abh tou bahut nuksaan ho raha hai. Dari Mat precautions must. Good morning
DeleteTake full precautions waheguru bless us all. Defeat current pandemic and let us all be winners. Good morning
DeleteWe all together will defeat mahamaari corona. Take full safety precautions and no excuses please. Good morning
DeleteJust the bubbling thoughts in my mind were oozed out In the form of writing a piece of poetry. Thanks for your encouraging pat. God bless
ReplyDeleteAmazing Lets pray together for the better health of our corona warriors and survivours K
ReplyDeleteCurrent corona pandemic is wrath of god .
DeleteLearn oh man learn honest means failing which bigger blow may befall .Thereafter don’t blame god . Good morning god bless
Third corona wave can be averted provided strong measures are taken, said principal scientific advisor to the government of India. Help all India fight and defeat corona please. Good morning but nothing to worry. Take full precautions
DeleteThanks for your encouraging words. Yes we must all pray for the Good health of Corona warriors that is doctors and paramedical staff and frontline workers who worked tirelessly during the trying situations. Also the survivors who fought the virus successfully deserve praise. God bless all
ReplyDeleteSave self and save all
ReplyDeleteBy taking full safety precautions
To take precautions must teach all
Need of the hour
Must save humanity and defeat corona once for all. Good morning god bless ( patients) all
DEFEAT CORONA
DeleteCorona, corona and Corona
All around corona
Abundant corona
Talk of the town corona
GALTI HUM SABH KI
AUR GOVERNMENT KI
Samay par slow action and over confidence
Badh gaya corona
We all together ( government and balance all of us ) can defeat corona
Safety precautions full bhaag jayega corona
Ho jayo ikk jutt baga do corona
Good morning
This is wonderful sir I always follow you
ReplyDeleteDear thanks for your good words . We want people to learn and grow. United we stand and divided we fall. We together are a reckon able force and will defeat corona pandemic definitely
ReplyDeleteThank you so much sir for sharing this wonderful message !!! It is so appreciated!!!” “You always have good humor in your posts/blogs. So I formativeand easy to read!
ReplyDeleteDear Amit thanks for appreciating. Aim has been always to write something which is of some value to someone. Further to uplift the sagging spirit and never give up against heavy odds come what may. We all together will succeed and win
ReplyDeleteLet us all cooperate and support the government and defeat pandemic once for all. Never be complacent please an earnest request to all.
ReplyDeleteYou have rightly brought out a very important aspect of defeating corona pandemic successfully that is never be complacent.let us all together work in one direction and we will succeed. Let us all heave together and believe in god and we will hundred percent win war against corona
ReplyDeleteGaltian naa karo , kuch nhi hoga
ReplyDeleteBaag jayega dar ke mare corona
Waheguru karega raksha hum sabh ki, fikkar koi naa karna
You are right commit no mistakes and take full safety precautions and fikkar not ( worry not) and fear not Corona. Nothing will happen catch is precautions must and mandatory. Enjoy life waheguru bless
ReplyDeleteThe burgeoning Covid load case is on the decline is a faint glimmer of hope . We all must follow safety precautions and teach others around too. god bless all
ReplyDeleteIndia is doing its best to eradicate and control corona pandemic and its effects causing deaths. We all must adhere to safety precautions and break the chain of corona cases, is possible and not impossible. We will win together and celebrate. Gabrao kabhi nhi
ReplyDeleteThe author has nicely expressed his views about the present pandemic wrath of God which is sort of tragedy too. The present wrath has caused huge loss of precious human lives as well as on finance also. We all together should pray to God so that this tragedy may pass peacefully .Suraj
ReplyDeleteWorry not this shall pass too and good days soon will return. We all together must strive hard to follow all the necessary precautions to save human lives. This pandemic can be controlled by taking full safety precautions but by all and sundry . Thanks for your encouragement
ReplyDeleteParam sir you always bring out the life's issues and present pandemic in such a thoughtful and wonderful poetic form . The poet's heart you always possessed from our association in budding years in Army as young Lieutenants. Keep up sir
ReplyDeleteDear friend Shekhu really speaking am impressed they you know my heart too. Thanks for all that. Penned down thoughts so as to guide some individuals am sure is possible to put them on the right track. Society and country first always is my way of looking at things in this perspective. Let us get rid of current pandemic and help nation grow.
ReplyDeleteYaa u r very right colonel sahib
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajnesh so much . During difficult times there is a hope which sustains us , it is a fact . A person who even when in comma maintains positivity in mind will survive. Doctors say
ReplyDeleteYeh bartmaan Bakat hai
ReplyDeleteDo chaar din ka mohtaaj
Yeh bhi gujjar jayega
Tu buss zindagi Hans ke gujjaar
Kal acche din lekar accha bakat bhi aa jayega
True to the core. This shall pass too . A ray of hope should be there at the other end during adversity and despondency, come what may. Ups and downs are part of life. What goes up comes down .
ReplyDeleteWe all together will win provided we all take a pledge to weed out current pandemic and take full precautions. Jai hind
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely right. You have hit the nail on the head. Cooperate and support the government and take full precautions to defeat current pandemic so called corona. Together we are a great force to defeat pandemic and come out with flying colors out of this pandemic
ReplyDeleteFor sure we will succeed. Have patience and perseverance. But precautions must. A ray of hope during this despondency is cooperating and supporting government and taking of full safety precautions by all.
ReplyDeleteYes you are absolutely right. This is not the time to fight with individuals or the government. Infact time to help all by cooperating and supporting the government in handling the current pandemic and taking full safety precautions at individuals level and sort out differences later
DeleteVery true and wonderful
Deletepoem in which the poet has expressed his views in such a nice way so that the normal human being can grasp easily. Tragedy and tragedy all around in the present pandemic wrath is only for the few days and will also pass away peacefully. It is also a hearsay that the time has wings to be out of the tragedy so pray to God for passings this time peacefully and no such tragedy be fall again. Suraj
Dear Suraj absolutely and correctly you have brought out the facts of the current pandemic. Definitely will not last long and will finish in few more days. But we all must cooperate and support government and not get into faults finding mode and definitely not . Also we also must cooperate and take full safety precautions to weed out pandemic once for all
ReplyDeleteI wish it was longer, More power to You.
ReplyDeleteGod bless You
For me as you are aware society and humanity is first. Thanks a lot for your encouraging comments
DeleteYour outlook on life is amazing and You are one of the strongest people I know.
ReplyDeleteYour outlook on life is amazing and You are one of the strongest people I know.
ReplyDeleteMy aim is to always write which can be of some value to society in some form or the other . Can be a even a piece of advice in whatever form . We all must heave together is the catch point
DeleteYour outlook on life is amazing and You are one of the strongest people I know.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging comments which ask me to do further more better for the pleasurable reading by our readers in the blog. Assure you all will come upto your esteemed expectations
DeleteYou are so trustworthy, I always believe what you say.You have the best ideas.
ReplyDeleteThank you much for imposing trust in me and believe you me Will never let down anyone. Best ideas as envisaged by you about me are predominantly due to support of well wishers like you and my waheguru’s blessings. God bless you too
DeleteThank you much for imposing trust in me and believe you me Will never let down anyone. Best ideas as envisaged by you about me are predominantly due to support of well wishers like you and my waheguru’s blessings. God bless you too
DeleteBeautiful lines showing the reality of today's world .
ReplyDeleteSunil choudhary
Vijay pur
Dear Sunil thanks for appreciating. All to unite and unitedly fight against corona pandemic by taking full safety precautions and win against corona. Follow I am ok you are ok approach
ReplyDeleteBy pandemic,we learn the various lessons,what we are doing on earth,for nature,for society ,are we are following rules of nature n society.what are our deeds , betterment of humanity or not,you will result as your karma...Col GN Goswami ...
ReplyDeleteDear sir what you penned down is absolutely befitting during the current pandemic which we all are going through, a difficult phase of life. Good days will return that’s why I penned down few lines that is A RAY OF HOPE IN THIS Despondency . There appears a light at the other end. Maintain patience and perseverance
ReplyDeleteDear Param sir you have nicely penned down the situation prevailing and the people mindset in these pandemics and wars . But there are good people in these times who help each other and show that humane aspect . Keep penning down your excellent thoughts and motivate people for the cause of humanity .
ReplyDeleteOh dear Shekhu your well meaningful and nicely threaded and well worded comments are a delight for the readers really speaking. My thrust of writing is all about doing good to the society and nation in whatever little way one can. That’s all . Aim is to teach and preach good for the benefit of humanity at large. We all must take adequate precautions and teach people around to achieve a win win situation amidst the current pandemic
ReplyDeleteRightly said sir by way of ur excellent words ..this will motivate people for betterment of humanity...👍
ReplyDeleteDear Amit Abrol thanks for your encouragement. We all will get out of current pandemic soon. Maintain patience and perseverance. We all must help each other
ReplyDeleteGood sir what lines keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks for your concern. We will continue god willing
ReplyDeleteThank you for your concern
ReplyDeleteBe calm and cool in life
ReplyDeleteRemain composed in life
Live dignified way of life
Simply enjoy blessings in life
The list is pretty too long
Just have a cursory glance
Enjoy simply life
And associated pleasures with it
Life is too short , so enjoy life
Whatever little or more is left
Worry not about others richness
it’s temporary pleasure in fact
All will be swayed along
When life deflowers
So enjoy maximum
Say to everyone hello hoy
Much life gave all mixed
Pains and gains
Shrieks and groans
Freaks and frowns
Whatever, it gave blessings too
Count not the chickens before they are hatched
Count the chickens which are already hatched
Enjoy seven wonders of life
They are parents
Children, grandchildren and friends
Relatives , neighbors and enemies
All give us pleasures
Less the enemies who teach us lessons
Live life and enjoy moonlit full life
Live it well and count your blessings infact
Enjoy, enjoy and enjoy life
What if life had not given what we are
Then what, sobs no
To say you are too big
And super duper intelligent
Please boast not
In a jiffy it will be swept off
So, thank life
It gave what all you have
Think for a while if you have not
What all you have
Count your blessings
A tinge of happiness you would feel
Blessings list is too long
So soothing to your mind
Enjoy life cool and calm
Aberrations , bear if any
Good luck to all
Wish goodwill to all
Excellent Anshu you penned down the complete poem.
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