Freelance writer and motivational speaker

Monday, 5 April 2021

IF

 If thine wondrous mind wanders

Let it for certain wander

Let it move around and remain afloat

Offload thy worries load

Let it constructively remain occupied

Thousand reasons to remain happy it tried.

If hardwork is done

Success is done.

If hardwork brings success

So before success no recess

Then god too will bless.

If thee have to do

Never say i can do

Say got to do and will do.

If persistence gives success

Then by all means click yesses

And delete all noes.

If thy fully exhausted

Implies destination is just close by

And donot give up.

If no help comes thine way

Does not matter

Throng and become more strong.

If the going gets tough

Become more tough.

If on the way you feel beaten

You are mistaken you are not

Try the next lined up option.

If you are shaken you are not

Become success drunkard

And act like canard.

If you want happiness

Seek sprayers and sprinklers of happiness

These act as super duper spreaders of happiness

Now find happiness and goodness abound.

If people trust you

Shatter their trust not.

If they love you

Love them the most.

If someone still hates you

Worry not love them still

A great thrill

If dreamers are success achievers

They are because they are believers.

Walk with high gentry true

But ignore not the crowds

No ifs and buts

These are glaring mistakes

All yesses and no noes

Never question whys and hows

Failure shunned and success thee take

 

col parmjit

sainik colony, jammu

117 comments:

  1. Creativity and variety in life can only be brought about by a wandering mind.
    Let the mind fly and wander through unexplored territories to bring meaning and purpose to our existence.
    Beautifully brought out by the author.
    Maj V Thomas

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    1. Thank you so much. Your good wishes made things happen. God bless

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  2. Efforts are always to put across views which would be of value to the readers. Wish you good luck

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  3. Nice and befitting lyrics for the poem

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    1. Sir you as my senior taught me enough and I learnt a lot from you. Thank you always for moulding and shaping me a good and well mannered Human being

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  4. Nice and befitting lyrics for the poem

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  5. Sir thanks for your support

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    1. Dreamers are success achievers, because they are success believers. Period. Thanks for your support

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  7. Such a powerful and positive message. I can't stop myself admiring the author for the beautiful vocabulary chosen. For me, Happiness is the ultimate success.

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    1. Multiply Happiness Fragrance and spread it further for further good. Thanks

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  8. Yes. Success doesn't come easily. There is hard work, pain,struggle, firm belief and patience behind everyone's success. It's the investment that one must make to realise one's own potential. If one has a purpose and the gut to achieve it, success is just a destination. I thank the author to provoke me to write few lines. Looking forward to debate

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    1. Success comes to those who dare and dream. Success will bestow success on such individuals and touch their feet. You are one such person I believe. Thanks

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  9. You are right in saying so. Success comes to those who burn mid night oil.
    Hard work always pay you sooner or later. It never goes waste.
    Our young generation must strive hard to prove their worth and success in their life.

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    1. Yes agreed. A way forward is hardwork. Work hard, harder and hardest and no looking back. Success is an outcome of hardwork . Thanks buddy

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  10. ....much has been written, lectured,....but ultimately you yourself has to light the fire in yourself. Then light will glow from you.....
    Others will get lighted too from you.
    -Major Manjit Singh

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  11. Dear major manjit whatever and wherever we all must strive hard to make society a better living place. Will come through education. And yes ignition of sparkle is must.

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    1. Success comes only if one works hard, you are right

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    2. Success comes only if one works hard, you are right

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    1. Dear Ravi thanks. Please remember to achieve but believe

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  14. Wonderful words

    Comments by:Sanjeev

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    1. Thanks. Tried to pen down that success comes to those who dare and dream. If hardwork brings success so before success no recess

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  15. Become a dreamer and achieve success. Thanks. Learn to grow

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  16. Motivational and beautiful words......
    By Gopi

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  17. Thanks . Am happy if it appealed you . Your good wishes and my waheguru’s blessings. If hardwork is done success is done

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  18. Very True Sir..!!
    Success always comes from good thinking with good behavior and hard work and good values. head
    Seeing your thought creates a good thought in the mind.
    Where there is good thinking, there is good action.
    Stay blessed..!!

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    1. Success comes to those individuals who dare and dream followed by necessary immediate plans and subsequently definitely succeed

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  19. The main motive of this poem is to inspire our youth

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    1. Thanks. That’s what was aimed. Happy to note you liked it the most

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  20. My pleasure if you really got motivated. My aim is achieved.

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  21. Very true words. The success always comes to those who put hard work and devotion in the life. The success full human has always the struggle full history behind it. The success is not so easy but the others feels so . SURAJ

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    1. Yes agreed in totality, success is directly related with working hard , harder and hardest and success will come through, but true and no excuses please. Pardon.

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  22. Amazing thought process. What an imagination buddy. You are a classic writer. Dil maange more 🤩

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    1. My all buddies I like them, love them who are always supporting me. Some say three cheers, some say you are gem , some say you are hidden treasure and some like you say DIL MAANGE MORE. My god I am elated with profound happiness sure to do little more

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  23. True words from bottom of heart

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  24. Word 'IF' is very small but its metaphore compartively like a SEA & u did in this Poem

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  25. Thanks god bless. I just tried to pen down few lines in my own wisdom

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  26. Nicely written poem.To achieve success,there should not be if it but.Simply work hard, be positive and success will be yours.

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  27. Yes true buddy. Am elated with your nicely worded comments. No ifs and buts. Those who dream big followed by sincere efforts achieve what they believe

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  28. Nicely phrased poem with a fine touch of colloquialism beautifully defining mantras of success which never comes so easily.It involves hard work, strong willpower, clearcut vision ,self discipline, self confidence,optimistic approach & well defined goals. In additional to listioning to various motivational lectures by achivers ,a simple story of an "Ant climbing the wall" could also prove to be a good motivator for beginners towards their successful future aspects.Therefore,try ,try & try your best till cows come home.

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  29. Am convinced and more than Happy about your well weighed And well thought of views and comments giving all ins and outs of what one should do to achieve. Follow ant approach and try till you achieve but you believe. Thanks a lot buddy god bless

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  30. Am convinced and more than Happy about your well weighed And well thought of views and comments giving all ins and outs of what one should do to achieve. Follow ant approach and try till you achieve but you believe. Thanks a lot buddy god bless

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  31. It's great hardwork is done
    Success is done

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  32. If mind wonders let it wonder it will ponder. Do good before life is done

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  33. If you( hardwork) and me (self) come together, nothing can stop us from achieving what we desire. Success will touchdown and touch our feet. But have no ifs and buts. The author work is worth the praise.

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    1. Yes if mind wanders let it , it will find success, but our duty is to put in hardwork and if will do wonders. But yes no ifs and buts, but. Thanks

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  34. Baldev Singh. Dear Paramjit what a beautiful poem you have written. You are a gem unknown so for. Good you must keep spreading your knowledge for the benefits of society.Weldone dear.

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    1. My dear buddy thanks for your encouraging comments. I am not a gem in any way , no so much flattery please. But am focused towards making our society a better living place if I can

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    2. My dear buddy thanks for your encouraging comments. I am not a gem in any way , no so much flattery please. But am focused towards making our society a better living place if I can

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  35. Let it move around and remain afloat
    Offload thy worries load
    Let it constructively remain occupied
    Thousand reasons to remain happy it tried.

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  36. There are thousand reasons to be happy, you are absolutely right. If happiness is Associated with positivity and success. If is important but no ifs and buts

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  37. Wandering minds fly beyond the known into the realms of the unknown where one is able to see beyond our biases. An urge to expand our horizon beyond .... Beautiful expression!

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  38. Let the mind Wander and wandering of mind brings in happiness profound all around provided one is focused . Remember if hardwork is done success is done. Thanks for you pat buddy. Buddies are my great horse power asking me to explore more.

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  39. If no help comes your way worry not, become more strong. The author has rightly said so just implement that and help yourself and succeed in your future ventures too.

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  40. Say for example if god had not given what all we have today . Then what . And remember we all are lucky in many ways and god has given us so many things and thank his holiness the god for Beautiful gifts in our life, the life itself

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  41. If you can help others do it without a second thought. A good thing must never be delayed. If we all help each other during difficult times. Iss se accha aur kuch bhi nhi hai ( nothing is better than this )

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    1. Yes true if one is capable of helping, one must help. If you do good it would return as gift at some point of time in some form. This happening is a pleasure. Help but no ifs and buts

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  42. SURAJ . Very amazing thoughts are expressed in the poem which helps the person in his whole life. Only those personnel can be success achiever who are the dreamer first. No dream No aim No struggle No success. So be a dreamer put struggle and achieve success. There is no success without struggle. Regards

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    1. If honesty is the best policy. Please follow it to the hilt and amazing positive results will accrue. If positivity commands the mind let the mind explore much more positivity and wonders will happen on its own.

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  43. You have hit the nail on the head by expressing your thoughts. Yes your are absolutely right in saying that if no aim, no dream , no struggle and definitely no success comes your way. So plan prepare and aim , work hard and succeed

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  44. jai hind ghar main reho bahar na nikle

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  45. Dear surinder thanks. You too take care please

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  46. Dear surinder thanks. You too take care please

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  47. If you resolve to do a job , nothing and nobody can stop you . But there should be no ifs and buts. Well done sir.

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  48. Dear sharry you are absolutely right, nothing can stop a man who is willed and well determined but no ifs and buts . Thanks for being supportive

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  49. If I am asked to choose between health or wealth, I will definitely choose health. If I am asked to choose between happiness or money, I will choose happiness. Hai naa if ka kamaal

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  50. Very rightly you have brought out that health first and foremost and above alland definitely over wealth and also you correctly said that happiness is most important aspect in one’s life really speaking

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  51. Thank you for sharing inspiration and motivational thought

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  52. If fertile mind wonders let it , it will explore success through the principle of hardwork. And thanks for appreciation. God bless

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  53. God bless 💖🤣💖🤣🤣🤣

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  54. Thanks unknown. God bless you too. If the mind Goes around to seek positivity. Let it go

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  55. If the mind ponders let it wonder and find happiness and success altogether a good wonder really speaking, but no ifs and buts but

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  56. Your perspective is refreshing....
    By Gopi

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  57. Dear gopi if one can help one must and if one is resolved to do a thing for sure he will do and achieve. Thanks for your good wishes

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  58. Nice Dear Param. Keep it up.
    Regards

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  59. Thanks my dear sir.if no ifs and buts , person succeeds. Thanks a lot for encouragement

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  60. .....so before sucess no recess....
    Sir..... great words......inspire me alot

    .....GREAT.....

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  61. Thanks Ashrat . Great is allah, iswar , Bhagwan, waheguru or any god or goddess. Aim success achieve and set the next goal to achieve further more. This should be the way to achieve what one believes

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  62. Happiness is most important and there are people who are always happy despite constraints enroute to happiness . So let us all choose happiness a way of living life

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  63. Good. We have found one more good Positive Writer...
    Well Done!!!
    Great Colonel..

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  64. Oh dear Manoj thanks a lot for your encouraging words, which ask me to do little more better for society or my country by requesting all to each one teach one. I always maintain , be positive and see positivity as a solution to all problems . Positivity above all and see the solution in every problem.

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  65. You have a gift for making people comfortable. You really seem to know who you are. I admire that. Stay blessed.

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  66. If I can be of some help to the society, I must play my part . A good society is a unique and all together effort is must. . If we all are united a good society is in the offing

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  67. Dear col. Paramjeet Singh,you have proved nicely n thoroughly that you are doing a great social service for for humanity under these covid-19 pendemic, it shows how you have dedicated yourself for the safety n awareness for their safety. We all are grateful to you for your hard wirw n full dedication for the safety of our all types community people. God bless you enough strength to do this wonderful task. Well done n keep it up.Hats off to you my dear.Col. Jai Singh,Rohtak Haryana.

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  68. Dear sir your pat from time to time act as a catalyst for me to prove better every time. No ifs and buts if one is determined to make an effort to win. Yes you are absolutely right a good society Is my concern and we all together can make a better living society as we all are the force multipliers, but must all pull in one direction

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  69. Thanks for your good wishes.you liked the poem am extremely happy that you found it an interesting read

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  70. Dear col. Parmjit,your blogs are very educative n eye opener n you work very hard n spare your very valuable time for your readers,one should read your blogs regularly so that all people are motivated n a very sensetise onfoinforma about health n korona safety measures are brought into the knowledge of every one.Such people like col. Parmjit are found very rare in our country,he is never doing anything for his Benefit but only for the welfare of all citizens of India. I pray to God for his safety n always happiness in life to come.well done n.keep it up.

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  71. My dear sir a lot encouragement from you always and every time right from academy days till now acts as a force multiplier to pen down few thoughts of mine for the benefit of readers as much as possible . My aim has always been a good society and a superb nation to live in and let us all unite a make our society and nation a role model society and nation. It is possible provided we remain united and work together in one direction to make nation strong and a great nation. God bless all

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